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Hi,

How are you?

I have a children's book in publishing processes, and I need your help. Do you think it's an interesting short description?

"When you grow up, what do you want to be?

The answers to this wuestion are many,
And none is wrong or right.
Everyone is different;
No one is alike.
Do you know what you want to be?
What do you want for your life?"

I also need your help in one more thing. I need a short description for the site of the publishing house. Is it an interesting short description?

"When I was 5 years old, my mother always told me that happiness was the key to life. When I went to school, they asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down 'happy'. They told me I didn't understand the assignment, and I told them they didn't understand life." John Lennon RIP
Even when John Lennon was little, he knew that happiness was the most important think in the world. He has lived on to bring inspiration to many people. People often change their mind about who they want to be, but most of them forget the most important thing: the sparkle in their eyes.

I have been writing for 14 years, and I have finally gotten an offer for my first book. It's a children's book and I really want it to go well, but I need outside eyes to tell if the short descriptions look interesting.

I would appreciate your feedback. Thank you in advance!

I write adventure, romance and short stories. I love Agatha Christie and Judith McNaught.