The Angel Lounge

Sometimes it's much easier to review if you have good templates. I've poached these from around the site, and tweaked them so they worked for me. I'll post them if anyone wants them!

Hello,

I'm Mastiff, and I'm going to review your work! I'm just an amateur, so take it all with a grain of salt, as it's just my opinions. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I appreciate being able to read it.

First impression:


Things That Might Make It Better:


Mechanics:

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Things I Like:


Final Comments:


Mastiff



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Hello,

My name is Mastiff and I'll be reviewing your piece. These are just my thoughts and forgive me if I ramble, and realize I make just as many mistakes as anyone else. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

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Initial Reaction:

Setting:

Character Development:

Plot:

Ending:

Line-by-line and Suggestions:

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Happy Writing!

Mastiff



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Hello there,

I'm Mastiff, and I'll be taking a look at your work today. I have to be honest, I'm not a poet, don't know much about poetry, and the rules are much different than other writing. So take everything I say with a grain of salt, or a winter bag of it, knowing these are just my thoughts. I won't do much as far as technical corrections, unless I see something that really sticks out, because the rules are just so different. Thanks for sharing your writing!

Why I chose it:

How it made me feel:

Points I thought you made:

Anything Technical:

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Final Thoughts:

Thanks again, and happy writing!

Mastiff



When a true genius appears in the world, you may know him by this sign, that the dunces are all in confederacy against him. ~ Swift