Noticing Newbies

I've been working for years on a book series I call the Universe of Ealdo. I've writing.com before under a different name, Noiry Tretsinnal but that is really just the name of one of my characters. I'm not new to writing.com but my account is and my stories are updated as well. I'll be sponsoring the story for the foreseeable future and offering a lot of gift points for a review. I'd love to hear what other people think of it and I love hearing constructive criticism, especially when it will help me be a better writer. So please read my story, leave a review and I hope you enjoy it.