Thank you so much for your in-depth review. It amazes me when you point out such simple things I miss like the use of modern-day things to set the time period. I have a very clear picture of these characters in my head and how they feel. Now all I have to do is get others to feel the same way.
I actually have set each chapter, well most of them, to music (list in my portfolio) so I can remind myself what I want the chapter to say.
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