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Hi, hope I'm not too late. How about that after waking from the coma, it gives her the confidence to leave the abusive relationship. After a year or so, she is rebuilding her life and she sees the man of her dreams at a coffee shop or something and decides to take a chance and ask him out. It ends with her walking up to him, their eyes meet, he smiles and she smiles back. Something open ended but happy. It gave her a reason to doubt how her life was, and also gave her the strength to break out. I think that as an ending, especially if it's longer story, it could work.