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Sep 17, 2022 at 12:24pm
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Need adive on how to write climax of story
by Kel.Ari
I am writing my first story in 8 years and I have an idea I'm excited about but I'm not sure how to include one aspect:

I saw a video of a little girl sitting on the floor of an art gallery, trying to replicate the painting in front of her with her paints. The camera panned over and one woman in the crowd watching the little girl actually looked like an old version of the child. And I was thinking, it was if she was a time traveler and was looking at her younger self in real time. My basic idea is my character is an artist who no longer paints for herself. I want to include kind of like a "back to your roots' moment to be the motivator to focus on her life she wants as an artist and make changes to get there. I'm not too excited about the time traveler idea to so I'm asking for advice on how to include that moment that causes her to either have a vision, or somehow be able to see her "inner child" in real time.

I hope all of that makes sense*Meh* Any help is appreciated!
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Need adive on how to write climax of story · 09-17-22 12:24pm
by Kel.Ari
Re: Need adive on how to write climax of story · 09-26-22 2:10am
by wdobie71
Re: Re: Need adive on how to write climax of story · 09-26-22 8:31pm
by Angelica- House Florent B & W
Re: Re: Re: Need adive on how to write climax of story · 09-26-22 11:46pm
by BoB_618
Re: Re: Re: Re: Need adive on how to write climax of story · 09-29-22 9:51am
by Kel.Ari
Re: Re: Re: Re: Need adive on how to write climax of story · 09-29-22 10:00am
by Kel.Ari
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Need adive on how to write climax of ... · 09-30-22 6:30am
by BoB_618
Re: Re: Re: Need adive on how to write climax of story · 09-29-22 9:53am
by Kel.Ari
Re: Re: Need adive on how to write climax of story · 09-29-22 9:56am
by Kel.Ari

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