Crosstimbers Review Forum

I hope everything is well with you. Life can be hectic sometimes.

I like sending chapters through so I know what to focus on. I read all of your feedback and it means a lot to have it.

I really do appreciate this, once again. I need to apologize because this chapter is likely two or three times longer than anything so far. Maybe I'm trying to do too much with it. Please let me know.

Otherwise, it focuses more on trying to make peace. After the whole warehouse incident, Ben and Aidan want to take a break. They work to make peace and you learn more about Ben's sorted history of... Everything. The chapter tried to focus on how we sometimes make our families from tragedy, so please tell me if that came across very well. (Especially because Aidan has lost two families now, first at home then the one with Brittany.)

I hope you enjoy the historical context, I tried to put it in as much as I could. Stories should be educational and interesting, if Don Juan Manuel is to be believed.

Apologies for the length of this message. Once again, thank you for all of the time you've given my story so far. It has really helped me put everything together in any sort of coherent way. I have a somewhat decent idea of where to take things now.

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