Crosstimbers Review Forum

This is a moving piece, especially for the weekend of Memorial Day. The imagery is touching, poignant even, but it's more like free verse, like a meditation, than a conventional prose story.

I can provide constructive comments on convential stories, applying things I've learned about craft over the years. But the craft for a micro-story such as this is quite different. I liked the piece and found it moving, but I'm not qualified to make any more in-depth comments for a micro-story of this type.

I can admire what you've done, just as I admire most poetry, but writing it is beyond my ken, along with reviewing it. Thanks anyway, for sending it my way, but I'll have to decline to give an in-depth review.

Max Griffin
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