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Jul 19, 2023 at 5:34pm
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Ben There Chapter 7 Part 1- Review Request
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I am finally back to working on this after a few months whiling away in college. It was a ride. Like everything, though, it seemed like a good time to get back into the story. I am doing another two part chapter here, where Ben is beginning to assume leadership of Vince's family. They dealt drugs and as per Lucius's laws, are deemed illegitimate so long as they hold Vince at the helm.
         
Any and all feedback is appreciated and necessary. Thank you again for your time and effort.


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Ben There Chapter 7 Part 1- Review Request · 07-19-23 5:34pm
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Re: Ben There Chapter 7 Part 1- Review Request · 07-20-23 5:12pm
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Re: Ben There Chapter 7 Part 1- Review Request · 07-20-23 5:35pm
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