As previously mentioned, your description is a bit much. You're getting a ton of feedback because coming here to comment on stuff is a GoT activity. lol But I will say, you have some nice images in there. Well done!
IDK about the coach and owner thing, but maybe just call them the coach and owner and not actually give names? Or, better, talk to a lawyer. lol
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