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As usual you delight me with your mischievous humour.

you pure and chased... I take it that this is an intentional misspelling of chaste in the interests of punning .

You penchant for cliche is still, fun but somehow it did not sit so naturally in this episode as it has in the two earlier ones. I think you need to make more sense of the images.

For instance, if I remember rightly, in an earlier episode you refered to armies marching on their bellies, by evoking an image of them actually doing it. This made me laugh. Here you tend to simply list cliches without spending time to enjoy them.

Best wishes

Mavis Moog