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Given: Apr 24, 2010 at 7:11am
Length: 788 Characters |
719 w/o WritingML
Hallo und guten morgen. Ich bin Jessica and I'll be reviewing Spring Fevers on behalf of .
First Impressions:
Your imagery rocked! I can really picture everything so well and I almost felt like grabbing one of my canvas boards, buying some paints and drawing out the scene you depicted in your poem. I really liked the rhyme scheme and thought it flowed nicely. You use rich words that really work with the acrostic.
Mechanics:
I found no mechanical errors, however as I always tell writers, it wouldn't hurt to go back and proofread to make sure you're conveying all you want to convey.
Rating:
****
Final Thoughts:
Very nicely done! Keep up the good work and write on!
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