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Review of Spring Fevers  
Review by Future Mrs. B
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hallo und guten morgen. Ich bin Jessica and I'll be reviewing Spring Fevers on behalf of Everyday is Earth Day!.

First Impressions:
Your imagery rocked! I can really picture everything so well and I almost felt like grabbing one of my canvas boards, buying some paints and drawing out the scene you depicted in your poem. I really liked the rhyme scheme and thought it flowed nicely. You use rich words that really work with the acrostic.

Mechanics:
I found no mechanical errors, however as I always tell writers, it wouldn't hurt to go back and proofread to make sure you're conveying all you want to convey.

Rating:
*Star***Star***Star***Star***Halfstar*

Final Thoughts:
Very nicely done! Keep up the good work and write on!

Guten tag!
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