This is a thought provoking poem, which makes some very good points about Earth Day. The rhythm a little rough, but not distracting to the reader. Some of the rhyming pairs, such as Earth and mirth or homes and gnomes, seem forced, which is a little distracting.

I liked this line, Replacing our gardens flower by flower, because it suggest an action each individual can accomplish.

This is a thought provoking poem. Write On!