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 Grow More Trees: A Children's essay  [E]
This essay on Growing More Trees is designed to explain the concept to 8-10 yr old kids.
by Dr Taher writes again!
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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When one tugs at a single thing in nature,
he finds it attached to the rest of the world.
-John Muir-



I am here to give your piece,
*Right*"Grow More Trees: A Children's Essay"*Left*
a review for the "Earth Day Challenge"!!



"Vast Blue Seas & Oceans" (Strong Points)

I thought you did a very good job expressing the usefulness and importance of trees in everyone's lives. *Smile*

You listed the benefits, stated the problems and gave the definitions of the significant subjects used here... and they were all said clearly and in a way that is easy to understand. *Wink*

You also divided these into parts, sections- using numbers. I thought it was a good idea because it helped set apart each idea from the rest, giving focus on more important aspects. *Thumbsup*


"Convenient, Comforting Technology" (Weak Points)

I don't think I noticed any particular weak point in your piece. *Laugh*


"Supposed-To-Be Caretaker- Man" (Suggestions)

None whatsoever.


"Wide, Warm Land Forms" (Additional Chatter)

Thank you for sharing this here. Like I said, it's very easy to understand... I think it would be great if kids/children out there would be taught about how important trees really are in our lives. Sure, it's like common knowledge already... But sometimes, people believe in things more and protects these things, when given or shown concrete facts and explanations. *Smile*

Again, thanks for sharing. *Heart*



*Exclaim*"KEEP WRITING & INSPIRING"*Exclaim*
~mARi~
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