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| ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** When one tugs at a single thing in nature, he finds it attached to the rest of the world. -John Muir- I am here to give your piece,  "Mother Earth's Day" a review for the "Earth Day Challenge"!! "Vast Blue Seas & Oceans" (Strong Points) Beautiful!! Usually, I find it quite hard for long lines to flow well, especially when read out loud. But yours, were absolutely great.  I read the whole piece out loud twice, and couldn't find anything wrong with the flow and the words... and everything, really.  Not to mention what made me truly fal in love with this piece, was how honest and real the message was. How life-like every word felt...  "Convenient, Comforting Technology" (Weak Points) None. "Supposed-To-Be Caretaker- Man" (Suggestions) Don't change anything, it's perfect.  "Wide, Warm Land Forms" (Additional Chatter) Thank you for sharing this awesome piece to all of us. It's sad how everyone neglects Mother Earth... but it's nice to know there are still some people who actually cares, stopping to appreciate everything, even for just a moment.  "KEEP WRITING & INSPIRING"~mARi~
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You responded to this review 04/25/2010 @ 7:08am EDT