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 | Mother Nature Sets the Example  [E] What can I do to help preserve Mother Earth?  |
| (5.0)| ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** When one tugs at a single thing in nature, he finds it attached to the rest of the world. -John Muir- I am here to give your piece,  "Mother Nature Sets The Example" a review for the "Earth Day Challenge"!! "Vast Blue Seas & Oceans" (Strong Points) Wow!! That was a very beautiful, provocative essay there!!  I enjoyed reading it a lot. The truth behind your words and the emotions (frustration and sadness) within them were expressed really well.  It's sad how a lot of people neglect everything they have and realize the mistake too late... I wonder if we could ever really be able to follow the 4th R??  Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling-- All Superb!!  I love how you've written this piece, beautiful... flowing.  "Convenient, Comforting Technology" (Weak Points) I didn't find anything that can be considered as a weakness to this piece.  "Supposed-To-Be Caretaker- Man" (Suggestions) Don't have any suggestions for further improvement... I thought it's great the way it is.  "Wide, Warm Land Forms" (Additional Chatter) Thank you very much for sharing this piece. Reading it made me think of my own actions... As much as I'd like to preach sometimes about how everyone's treating our planet so bad, I'd be a hypocrite if I did. Because I know that I do have a part in the cause of the problem too. Thank you for again reminding me of my own errors through this piece.  "KEEP WRITING & INSPIRING"~mARi~
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