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TITLE: Fits the content well.

IMAGERY: Good and vivid. What a delightful way to start this readers day. This piece is funny and makes me remember John Wayne and his giant tuff guy image. Finding him not putting up with anything; it just his persona. While trying to shoot hat famous movie; little did we know he had to remove, forceably, several obsticles interferring with the shot. He proceeds to kill off people that keep him from saying his most memorable line. Funny and lighthearted. Clever and well done. Nice job with this. This reader cant help but picture him with his 'True Grit' attitude putting the bad/noisey guys down without a thought.


TONE: Good depth of feelings. The character exchanges is well done. The finish is priceless. A lot of thought must have gone into this piece. Came off without a flaw.




FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good

OVERALL: Good read. Please keep sharing.

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