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Changing my format for reviews.
DISCLAIMER: This comes to you as a reader would see your work. I have only my opinion to offer. Sometimes I might find a bit of your work I thought that I might express feelings about. If it struck a cord etc. If there should be such an entry under 'EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK' that is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.


TITLE: Fits the content well.


IMAGERY: Good and vivid. The character in this piece is just a young boy but when it came to doing what's right, it came second nature to him.

He sees another injured youth and helps. Not hesitating but jumping to action.

EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK: When we look at our society we find there are everyday heros out there. No matter how old or young. Something steps inside their souls and tells them what to do to save a life.


TONE: Good depth of feelings. He didn't stand around; he took action. He wasn't quite sure how to help but he helped any way. A true blessing on a bike.


SPELLING ERRORS: None found.


FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good

Lend a hand and help if you can.

Make the world a better place.

OVERALL: Good read. Please keep sharing.

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