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 AN ODE TO CRICKET--award winner  [E]
An ode to cricket [India is one of the eight countries that play test cricket]
by Dr M C Gupta
Review by Past Member 'wtrlillee'
Rated: E | (4.5)
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...the t, c, and k's rhythm of crispness. I love it! I think it slowed in the fourth stanza, third line with "thou can verily inflame". the line does tell you how much just raising the word, Cricket, can make the blood pressure go up, but wonder if could be changed to reflect the crispness in the total presentation.
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