The following is my opinion. Take what you want and pitch the rest.

The word "silking" really stood out to me. I wasn't really seeing how it worked here. I found it awkward and it threw my train of thought out of the otherwise interesting poem.

I could identify with the theme of the poem. I know many times I have looked in the mirror, and felt I was staring at a stranger. Many people will have felt the same experience.

Regards,
Ms. J
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