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| (5.0)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  Happy Earth Day! Here is a review to celebrate Earth and You, in your WDC Birthday month!  Wow! This is a complex construction. Thanks for the description you paced conveniently at the bottom of the page. I am not familiar with the form but I it seems like you used it correctly. I certainly loved reading it! such vivid images and the sound of the words made an impression. The 4th line of the first verse was so effective, repeated in other verses. I loved the sound and rhythm of "stacked and stored with a sigh"! So evocative of the time of year and the work it involved being finally done!.  Words like "waltz", summer thinned" ," whispers" , "spawns" and others add energy of vivid imagery. I could hear and see the time you speak of and could tarry in places as it evokes memories of times past and recent. I saw peasants, farmers, young folks at harvest dance, the trees on the horizon of hills in their beauty, and the essence of change in the wind. Amazing picture painting. Thanks for sharing your poetic gift here. I loved the vibraton and tone !  Happy anniversary and Light on the path as you write on!  eyestar  
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You responded to this review 04/22/2011 @ 4:58pm EDT