Hi Lolita-New Book! ,

I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Invalid Item" .

Title
A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Flow/Rhythm
Flow is good; line-to-line transition and breaks are done well. Your poem has a very nice rhythm to it.

Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation
Your word choice is excellent. Just a few errors I noticed. In your second line, "earth day" should be capitalized because it's a holiday so the reference to it in your last stanza should also be capitalized. Your third line has a semi-colon and I think that should be a comma. Your second stanza has the word "earth" in lowercase in two places. Since it's in reference to the Earth as a planet, it should be capitalized. Lower case "earth" is used when describing dirt, soil, etc.

Overall Impression
This was a thoroughly enjoyable read with a message that everyone should take heed to. We all need to do our part to take care of Mother Earth! My favorite part is your last stanza. It sums up your poem nicely and the message to the reader is quite clear. We all must do our part.

Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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