Hi Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop ,

I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Early Morning Treats" .

Title
I love your title! Indeed, what a treat!!

Flow/Rhythm
It could just be me but I think the meter might be slightly off in your second stanza. I think it's that third line that's throwing it off. Again, that might just be me.

Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation
Excellent word choice that is so vividly expressive! Well done! I think the first line of your last stanza might read a little easier if you add a comma after "finest".

Overall Impression
I felt as though I was drinking my cup of coffee and breathing in the air of a fresh, new day! My favorite part is the following:

"Auburn with purple and pinkish hues,
Beautiful colors all meld.
Scarlet-orange with a splash of blues.
Mother Nature makes the weld."

I can actually picture it! Great job!

Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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