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Review of Beauty of nature  
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Christina~Thanks StoryMaster ,

I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Invalid Item" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Your title is quite fitting as it captures the heart of your poem well. Great job! *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
It flows quite smoothly. Nice job!

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Your word choice is good. I see no spelling or punctuation errors.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
None, I like it just the way it is!

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was a thoroughly enjoyable read that was very well penned. My favorite part is your last 4 lines:

"The red-orange horizon during a sunset and
the clear blue water of the sea.
Nature inherits calm and peace.
If only humanity followed.... "

Such powerful words to close your poem, with your wish that humanity could be more like nature. Well done! Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

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