Hi 🌕 HuntersMoon ,

I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "The Bequest" .

Title
Great title! It's very thought-provoking and fits your poem well.

Flow/Rhythm
Your flow and line-to-line transition is good. I'm counting 8 syllables per line, making it flow easily while reading it. Rhythm is good also.

Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation
Your word choice is quite good. I see no spelling or punctuation errors.

Overall Impression
I like the addition of the picture. That, along with your words, pull at the familial heartstrings in all of us. My favorite part was the following:

"He took his grandson by the hand
and, in the small copse, patiently,
explained that each tree in the stand
had been planted by his family."

This made me think of my times as a child when I helped my grandpop in his garden.

This was a thoroughly enjoyable read that was very well penned. Well done! Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .

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