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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi janice48 Have a Nice Day!! ,

I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Invalid Item" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
A very fitting title.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Flow and rhythm are well done. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Your word choice is good. I only see one spelling error. In this line, "Your wonders we will hold tighly," your last word should be "tightly" not "tighly" (it's missing the second "t").

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was a lovely poem about the gift of rain from God. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

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