Hi murphyco

Yeah, it's me Ken, coming to invade your port again . This time, it is my pleasure to both read and comment on your work "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The Earth Day Challenge"  [ASR].

First Impression/Thoughts:
Way to go, Colleen! What a wonderful "reverse psychology" write about saving the environment. Irreverant and humorous, I can see why this is a winner!

Creativity/Impact:
I love that you took the back door into this timely subject. Rather than haranguing us, you defended our ignorance and taught us a lesson by example Brilliant move!

Content:
You write in defense of our wasetful ways, our disgust of things that smell or - worse yet - require us to actually do something. The nerve of some people and their unrealistic expectations! By your wonderful tongue-in-cheek write, you make us all a bit ashamed that we see ourselves in your words and drive home the your point: "I better start to care."

Technical Notes:
I would love to offer you a suggestion on how to improve this (you know me, I'm not shy LOL) but there's absolutely nothing I can offer. This was as close to a perfect write as I've seen. Bravo.

Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:
Thank you for sharing your wicked sense of humor and wonderful talent with me today.

Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more.

Keep writing! Wishing you sunshine and blue skies,

Ken