Hi hbar ,

I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Invalid Item" .

Title
Your title is great; short, sweet and to the point!

Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation
Great use of words here. You've done an excellent job with this. I see no spelling or punctuation errors.

Helpful Tips for Improvement
None, this is amazing!

Overall Impression
Two of my greatest loves in life (aside from my husband ) are writing and math. I love that this is Fibonacci Sequence, combining them both! Bravo!! The addition of the picture of the Fibonacci spiral and Fibonacci tiling is brilliant. This was also written quite masterfully. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!!

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