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Hi judyastra,

I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "Invalid Item" .

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A title that is very befitting of your depiction of the four seasons. *Wink*

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The flow and line breaks are good. Rhythm is nice also. *Star*

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Great choice of words. I see no spelling or punctuation errors. Well done! *Star*

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None, it's great as is.

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This was a wonderful read! I really enjoyed your description of all the seasons. I am a "summer baby" so, of course, your stanza about summer is my favorite. My favorite lines are as follows:

"For many it is a time to go to the beach,
On my tropical isle, that is in easy reach."

*Envy* *Left* That is me, green with envy! *BigSmile*

Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

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