Wow! There's such a soothing quality to your poem - the words, the layout, the colours. It's beautiful. Love the images it conjures up.

My small suggestions:-
1. Maybe you'd like to hyphenate sing-song in the first verse.
2. In the last verse, you've used 'ends' and 'end' - maybe you'd like to change one of those for a greater impact.
3. In the last verse, you use 'like' twice, likening to the fish hook and the question - maybe it would flow smoother if you used 'or' or 'and' instead.

Lovely, lovely poem.





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