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 Embracing Spring  [E]
It's spring, enjoy the season! Entry for Pond Poetry April 2011
by Sum1
Review of Embracing Spring  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Dear Sum1 :

I felt this to be a charming little poem that pays homage to the one season that just about everyone loves ~ Spring.

For most of the country, spring represents a time to thaw out and let new life begin growing. Unfortunately, for many others, those spring showers often mean floods. Also, due to warm temps from the south that collide with cold temps from the north, tornadoes are formed, especially in the midwest, and that is what we are seeing right now.

It would seem that each season brings its own blessings and curses to various or different parts of the country. Regardless, Spring promises new beginnings and growth, and the autumn brings bountiful harvests and a relief from high temperatures. Those are my two favorite seasons as they usually are mild compared to the blasting heat of the summer, and frigid, frozen nightmare of the winter.

I noticed that you used a little end-of-line punctuation in this poem, but the majority of the poem was lacking that attention. I think that this would read a lot better with consistent punctuation.

Thank you for sharing your poetic work with this community! *Smile*
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