An evocative poem about nature which then moves deeper - into the realm of music and spirituality. I appreciate the way you've woven this transition.

Suggestions:-
1. In the first verse, you repeat the word 'mind'. (through my mind; state of mind) Maybe you could consider changing one of those.
2. Where you say yet the reassuring words "Peace, be still" come to mind. - it makes the line long and trips up the reading a bit. You could shorten that line by using 'yet says ...'

Thanks for sharing this lovely poem!




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