Happy Earth Day! I had jsut intended to read this as the title was interesting but had to say to say WOW! I love the natural connected flow of the this weaving which reminds me ot the oneness of all here form one cycle to the next. The font colours are a nice touch too. Captivating language presents an appealing scene that speaks of the magical or the mystical. Effective vocab for the theme and soundscape made it a pleasure to read aloud.. I loved the images of the "seeds whispering" "the scars" "the sing-song" and the "stones turning". Brilliant! Evocative ending too. Powerful concept in the last lines! I bow to you, wordweaver! Light on the path as you write on! eyestar |