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 Object Of My Affection  [13+]
Did you ever love someone that didn't even know you exist? That's not a good feeling......
by waynelee
Review by gladiola
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello waynelee
This is gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Object Of My Affection.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Concept/Premise *RollEyes*
A girl who doesn't know of the love someone has for her. That is really very hard.

Overall impression: *Reading*
I really sympatized with that poem specially that he had great respect for the girl and wished to treat her in a great way and make her so happy. It is a loss that she doesn't feel that at all.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
I would treat you like an angel,

and fill both our hearts with bliss,
Those where my favourite lines because it shows pure love and not mere infatuation. I can feel how precious she is through those lines.

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Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart.
William Wordsworth



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Reviewed By Gladiola


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