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Oh the Cost  [13+]
This is about the price any soldier could pay. Please be respectful when you r/r it.
by BIG BAD WOLF is hopping
Review of Oh the Cost  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Big Bad Wolf, I am ~Lisa~I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group and I would like to review your piece of work on soldiers and war called, "Oh The Cost".
I am speechless, this is the most beautiful piece I've read since I've been at WDC.
You brought tears to my eyes because I know the personal sacrafice of each of the soldiers; my daddy was an air force soldier during the Viet Nam "War" he had to pay the ultimate cost as he died in a VA Hospital a result of Agent Orange!


You have done such a good job at informing we the public about the high cost of our freedom. Your poem flows well and has a good rhyming scheme to it. I couldn't find anything wrong with it. On the contrary everything was just right. Write On! good day
*Paw*~Lisa~*Cat* *Thumbsup*

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