Review of showering acts of joy

Why I chose this piece Anniversary review

Overall impression of piece I am impressed with what you can do. I marvel at that ability because I am not so annalytical in terms of languarge arts. Hey, I was a biology major and specialized in Pathology. Malignant versus benign. I always get that. The rest I kind of slog through or get my wife the English major to help me.

Grammatical and spelling errors: It seems well done

What I liked? I am impressed with this kind of detail and attention. I like knowing what your focus is. I like nonfiction the best. I am bilingual enough to review poetry. I can extend myself and do short stories, but it takes a lot more effort for me. I love the detail afford dialogue, location and show don't tell, It us true of a lot of things. This had an informal chatty appeal. The words themselves kind of said dissection. I have done autopsies for 32 years and have never had a volunteer. (Not a 100% true, but it is a long story.)

What I disliked I think you can see what is important to my evaluations. I like to go through specifics. If you have a template you use, maybe it should be added. Mimmicry is flatery. I can handle this. As you can see, I believe in a balanced review with likes and dislikes. There is always something good about almost every piece and maybe something to think about. Your description of what you do is impressive. I would put stuff in about the formatting to make it easiest to read

How the piece made me feel This seems a little harsh and foreboding. I love that you can do this but might be intimidated based on tone. I have had bad reviews based on nothing so I guess your couldn't be too bad.

Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting.

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Peace and beauty in freefall
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