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This is very poetic. Some of the lines are kind of broken english, which is excellent when the message is delivered as it is here.

A forever friendship from childhood to old age is a rare and treasured thing. Your poem emphasizes this.

I really like the way these two go through life together sharing their pains, joys and sorrows. They are fortunate to have each other.

The rhyming is a little inconsistent, but good. It adds a little something to the rhythm.

Favorite Phrase: "Forever- that one may end, But this be remembered and kept within. - I'm not sure at what age these words were said, but they are wise nonetheless.

Overall: This poem is touching and moving. It makes me glad for the friendships I have.

Reviewed by frankcraft.