Review of showering acts of joyAndrew

Why I chose this piece I am not sure where I found this. I put it on my reading list. Probably advertised

Overall impression of piece: Very few pieces I can say that I am intrigued and wish I knew more about. This is one of them. Christians are supposed to have this ministry of reconcilliation. Most have no idea that it is even there

Grammatical and spelling errors: Seems intact.

What I liked? I don't think we will ever see a perfect world until God's millenial kingdom on earth. Until then, I think we kid our selves. The world is waiting for Christians to intervene. By in large, that hasnt happened yet. I like the fellowship of working together. Unfortunately, I see little of that either. I think your view is both realistic and hopeful

What I disliked: I really wanted to know more. Poetry perpetually leaves blanks, but this is so powerful, the blanks yell to be filled in. Most do not feel they can make a difference. Most don't even see it as an option

How the piece made me feel: There is a hunger to be valid and of value. I really get that and feel that. I wish I could say, I could write that, but I can not

Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting.

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