Hi Sandy B. ! Thank you for allowing me to read your writing. I hope my comments are helpful. However, you are always encouraged to follow your own instincts and always keep writing!

First Impressions:
Very cute! I really enjoyed this story of the superstition surrounding black cats.

Spelling/Grammar:
‘Perfect’ she cackled. The witching hour has begun, time to make me a feline friend.’
There should be a comma after "Perfect" and a quotation mark before "The".

It was just after daybreak
It was is not the best way to begin a sentence. Perhaps something like "the sun rose in the eastern sky as the cat reached the town centre".

I loved the description of the creation of the cat.

Ashley

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