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Review of In the Dark  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Ashley ,
after reading your piece I have the following comments for you! *Smile*

*ButterflyO*First Impression: A very creepy, little piece.

*ButterflyB*Suggestions: I don't have any, this piece was superb and I greatly enjoyed it.

*ButterflyV*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar: No mistakes that I can see. Some looked odd to me, but I believe that was the difference between American English and British.

*ButterflyR*Something I love about this piece: Everything. The title was especially suitable.

From Shaye

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