Hi lynntarzan
I read your story, here is my review. "Congratulations on your four years with WDC".
Please remember, I'm a writer, just like you, and these are only my impressions. My ultimate goal is to be helpful and supportive. Thanks for sharing your work.

OVERALL SENSE: This is a beautifully written piece that speaks from the heart. The more I read, the more moved I became. This is explained so clearly, when you walk with God, your life will have meaning. I truly am glad I picked this for your anniversary review. Reading this made me realize and ask myself, what am I doing with my life? Good job. I'm hoping more people read this as this is a very inspiring explanation of how God works.

         TITLE: The title, GOD'S MOSAIC, fits this story perfectly.

         STYLE/VOICE: The style is religious and the voice stays strong throughout as we stay with the main character whose life is shattered and put back together by God.

         SCENE/SETTING: The scene and setting takes place as a woman is contemplating her life and sometimes the wrong paths she has taken.

         CHARACTERS: The main character is a woman that feels her life has become a broken mosaic and she finds God. He is busy healing her self-doubt and tells her to pick herself up and walk with him. Together they'll find the right path.

         PLOT: The plot is mainly about life in general. You choose your own path as you live your own life. Later on, as you look back, you wonder about those wrong choices and it feels like broken pieces that will forever be there. Everybody feels this way at a certain point in their lives, and this woman found God, and he helped her with this feeling of being lost.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING: I found no errors.

AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: NONE

         LIKES: I like how this story is written. It tells of hope, that yes, you can be saved if only you let God into your heart.

         DISLIKES: I found nothing to dislike.

FAVORITE LINE(S): As my Father's loving embrace surrounds me I hear Him say.. "My child, these are the areas you walk in with me today, having chosen to allow me to lead you along the way. The seams will not be pain-free, the breaking shall not go unfelt, but flawless shall be the end result. Together, you and I shall complete your masterpiece, which, my child, is your gift to me".

COMMENTs: A religious teaching that no matter how wrong a path you take, there's always hope. These lines above are filled with just that kind of hope, that God is forgiving if you just let him in. People are so closed up sometimes, thinking they can go it alone and find themselves lost and bewildered by the life they have led.
Your descriptions are so beautiful that I could see and picture these scenes. I enjoyed reading this.

Take care now, keep on writing, I’ll keep on reading,
Jeannie