Review of showering acts of joy member to member

Why I chose this piece: Anniversary

Overall impression of piece: No one can say these aren't original images. Certainly they are not cliche. I can certainly see and touch what is going on. Is it hot in here, or is it just me?

Grammatical and spelling errors: Melting mispelled?

What I liked? This certainly is an evil world. No doubt about it. Pick a poster, any poster. Like the image of melting hands. Kind of like the wicked witch of the East. We are powerless on our own

What I disliked: Drowned in devils seems just past tense. Nothing else is to be done as you are drowned. Jesus with a lasoo seems a little off. He wants to bring us into relationship not send us a life line. Jesus knew when he was touched that power was leaving him (woman issue of blood). I think this became a matter if He is accessible

How the piece made me feel: I have a feeling that this is how you got this vision. It is hard to argue with a vision. I guess there is a question of whether there is more explanation

Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting

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