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 The Day The Sky Fell  [E]
One day, the sky fell, or did it? (No, it's not Chicken Little)
by Sum1
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Sum1 . This is a review from "Showering Acts of Joy Group" ! *Smile* After reading "The Day The Sky Fell"  I have the following comments to offer.

*Reading*Title:
YOUR COMMENTS This title is a perfect fit. The discription made it a mmust read. This is truly not no chicken little.

*Flower1*First Impression:
YOUR COMMENTS I could see why one would think the sky was falling, while the other friend reasoned why it was not.

*Quill*Flow/Showing
YOUR COMMENTS The flow was beautiful. The showing was great, everything is shown clearly.

*Idea*Suggestions:
YOUR COMMENTS none that came to me off hand.

*Apple*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:
YOUR COMMENTS none that came to me off hand.

*Star*Things I Like:
YOUR COMMENTS I love this story as a whole. It shows us that we as humans are not the only beings that are on the earth. Looking through others eyes is always a good rule. I love how you did not rush the polt or the story line. It came to the reader with a great pace that I felt was great. The idea that a bug would look up at the sky and think he was the only beings in the world kind of is the way humans think. The question now is, will our sky start to fall. Great work!!!


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