Hello Sierra,



I am reviewing your poem, 'Follow His Leading,' an inspirational poem with a hopeful ending. The poem is well written for the most part.

Suggestions:

I would suggest breaking the poem into 'stanzas or verses.' To have natural breaks helps in clearer, easier reading.

You wrote: 'Can keep anyone from being mad.' Do you mean 'insane' or 'angry.'
You wrote: 'The only thing we need to mean,' I don't understand this phrase, maybe you need to delete 'to mean.'

I enjoyed your uplifting poem.

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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .