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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Reading*Title:
YOUR COMMENTS This was a hard choice, with so many great titles in your port. However, since I am the head of the Irish Drinking Songs Campfire, I thought this would be a good read for me.

*Flower1*First Impression:
YOUR COMMENTS How many times have I or someone I know been to "Margaritaville"?

*Quill*Flow/Showing
YOUR COMMENTS The flow was great, no bumps to stumble on. The showing was good, I could just see you sitting there with the family, wanting to be any where else for a short while.

*Idea*Suggestions:
YOUR COMMENTS None that I could see off hand.

*Apple*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:
YOUR COMMENTS None that I could see off hand.

*Star*Things I Like:
YOUR COMMENTS I love this story. It is full of funny action. I think we have all been there, the time where we want to do nothing more than lay in bed and die but other people had other ideas for us. And those ideas made for a worse day than laying in bed all day would have. I love how there was no sugar coating the issue, yet you did it without using words some might have to tell this story. Great work!


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