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 Glory and Honor?  [18+]
Why does he fight? Glory is a thing of the past, but still he fights on, for...
by Duke-CastleChaos
Review of Glory and Honor?  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Duke-CastleChaos . This is a review from "Showering Acts of Joy Group" ! *Smile* After reading "Glory and Honor?"  I have the following comments to offer.

*Reading*Title:
YOUR COMMENTS Glory and Honor? Caught my eye since I am a big fan of our miltary.

*Flower1*First Impression:
YOUR COMMENTS I felt sorry for the main character, he seems like he has lost his faith in our miltary, or maybe just in what they are ordered to do. Or maybe it is because of the way some of our country folk are not standing behind them. What a surprise I got when I read on. *Smile*

*Quill*Flow/Showing
YOUR COMMENTS The flow is great in this story, I did not have to reread anything nor did I stumble while reading. The show was perfect for a short story. I could see a man sitting and writing this, thinking about over all that had happened to him and his family.

*Idea*Suggestions:
YOUR COMMENTS Nothing that stood out to me when I was reading.

*Apple*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:
YOUR COMMENTS Nothing that stood out to me when I was reading.

*Star*Things I Like:
YOUR COMMENTS I loved how this story started out making you think this was about one of our men now, and it turns out to be one of the future. I love how this story was set up and delivered. It is so well written and thought out. It made me think about what might be. I am very impressed with this story. Great job.


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