Hi, Jim!

This is Jan and I want to wish you a Happy 2nd Anniversary on WDC. I also dropped by to give you a review.

I liked your story and the title, which pulled me in.

Over-all Impression:
A very nice story of a mother doing a good deed for a family she had never met.

Your Tone and Mood:
Smooth and cheerfully written. I liked the "feel" as I read it and knew it was going to be all good.

Setting and descriptions:
I visualized the restaurant well and the two tables of customers. I think you did a great job here.

Dialog, if any:
Some dialog which did help carry your story forward.

Grammar, spelling, sentence structure, etc.
I did not see any errors here.

Plot:
I felt you carried out your story with good rising and falling action. I was surprised at the ending but needless to say, it was a nice surprise.

My Personal Thoughts Here:
I guess you never really can judge a person by their dress or how they appear to be, huh? This mother asked for nothing in return, but only to do a good deed for the family sitting next to her. She appreciated the military and found pleasure that the young adults and children could play together.

I came away with a good feeling ...Thanks for sharing your story!

Inker

I am a proud Reviewer of the WDC's Power Group.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed"