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 Fag.  [E]
This is a poem I recently wrote about the negative reactions I got about my homosexuality.
by Bateman
Review of Fag.  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This review, obviously, is just my opinion. If my suggestions help, I am glad. If not, please don't take it personal, because it wasn't meant to be.


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It has always astounded me how people think what others do is any of their business. The gall and egotism it must take to assume that they have a right to tell others what to do. I'm not a young person and so none of this is a surprise, but it still causes me to shake my head whenever try to make other' people's lives their business. I have one rule: be nice to me and those I know and I will have no problem with others. Yet there they are, sticking their nose into matters that shouldn't interest them. Yeah, people astound me, an usually in bad ways.

I have sympathy for you, and for anyone under the radar of bigots and other small minded people, I wish I could tell you it gets better, but we both know the only way things improve is to find a place without such people in your life. And that isn't easy.

As you undoubtedly know, there are enlightened people in the world, it is just, the bad ones are a lot louder, and with the current culture, it seems ignorance has come back in fashion. Sadly.

It's a good poem, not only the message but the style and tone too.

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