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The following are only my suggestions. Ultimately, you can decide what is best for your item. You can ignore any of the suggestion or opinion if you disagree.

This is a good prose. The way you expressed your feelings was excellent as well as the use of words was good. This prose flows good and becomes really touchy in the end. My favourite lines were "I want you to know my feelings for you,
however I am not that brave to tell you,
or am afraid that you have someone else already."

The poem is really nice and tells that you really love that person and you expressed your inner feelings and why you are so shy to tell that person about your true feelings which is a very emotional part 'cuz what if that person really does have someone else which can also break your heart? I hope this poem is not real

There were no spelling errors though I have a few suggestions:

==>"your presence around me relaxes me"---The repetition of the word 'me' is ruining the flow here. You might want to revise this and change it to something that will have a good flow.
==>"I can die calmly"--The word 'calmly' don't suit here (for me atleast).
==>"when I am with you"--There should be a comma here.
==> I noticed that you have put commas everywhere in your poem, even at places when it is not required. Why not revise it and you will know from where to remove the commas. I am sure you will know it


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