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Given: Jul 7, 2012 at 6:35am
Length: 386 Characters |
386 w/o WritingML
Very, very scary story. I found myself quite nervous through out. I can see how the story might make people uncomfortable, but that is a sign of a good horror story not a bad one.
My only complaint, it ends too soon. I think for a true sense of her hopelessness we need to see the narrator in her predicament for a while longer. Another little scene or two and it would be perfect.
You responded to this review 07/07/2012 @ 9:12am EDT
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